Original fictional SemiAgora teaching text. Not a client manuscript, publication or measured result.

Language and comparison
Change rationale: Correct tense and subject-verb agreement without adding a mechanism or changing the comparison.
Author query: Confirm the temperature and whether both groups used the same measurement protocol. No missing condition has been invented.

Claims and evidence
Change rationale: Keep the supplied numbers while removing unsupported causal and reliability claims. This is an illustrative comparison, not a new experiment.
Author query: Supply variability, independent-device definitions and mechanism-specific measurements before claiming trap elimination.

AUTHOR ACTIONS
Confirm measurement conditions and the intended comparison.
Define independent samples and the uncertainty calculation.
Approve the narrower conclusion or supply evidence for a stronger claim.
Check the final manuscript against actual data and the target journal instructions.